高一英语作文投诉信

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篇1:高一英语作文投诉信

Dear boss,

Thank you for reading my letter.

Last Sunday is my classmate Mary's brithday.We went to your restaurant so as to celebrated Mary's brithday.But your restaurant was not good than I expected.We couldn't tolerate that restaurant at all.The service was really bad and the food was awful.The most unbearable was the hygiene of the restaurant was horrible,we felt very disgusting.

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Li Hua

这是一篇高档习作,得分23。

1. 要点齐全,细节补充合理。第2段实事求是地阐述产品问题,逻辑清晰,有条有理。第3段提出解决建议,语气郑重礼貌,不卑不亢。

2. 亮点词汇短语表达运用得当。如:seem to have done, out of order, arise, search for, put sb. to great inconvenience, take sth. into consideration.

3. 长短句并存,句式灵活多样,文章节奏感强,语用能力突出。如:

Having used it for several days, I found the router seemed to have been out of order and problems have arisen one after another. (现在分词完成式作状语)

What made matters worse was that the signal of wireless network was not stable, which made it difficult for my iphone or ipad to connect to the net via WIFI, putting me to great inconvenience. (主语从句+非限定定语从句+现在分词作结果状语)

If not properly settled, a full refund would be acceptable. (条件状语从句的省略)

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